Thursday, July 21, 2016

A teacher, some jewelry and a torch

Assignment: Write for at least 150 words about a piece of jewelry, a torch, and a teacher. Focus on distinguishing characters through dialogue.

“That pendant is lovely,” he said. Tempted to let his eyes linger on the curve of her neck and rise of her chest, he quickly lifted them and flashed that effortless smile he always had for his students, before directing his attention back to tidying the work bench.

Marla somehow felt his discomfort and knew he was attracted to her. At 16, she was really only starting to understand how men were influenced by a little exposed skin. She was both embarrassed and a little aroused. Mr. Brown was one of the most popular teachers. The boys liked him because he taught shop and played at being young and hip. The girls adored him for his smile and mop of curly hair.

“Did you make it yourself?” he asked.

“Sorry?”

“The necklace. Did you make it yourself? I remember you telling me that you liked home made jewelry and wondered if you tried making it yourself.”

“No, no. I’ve never been able to work the torch well enough. My welds are always too messy.”

“I could help you with that,” he said, and instantly both of their heart rates rose a little.

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